Got done with some chores and saw this was uploaded so I sat down to give it a read!
I so very much sympathize with the feelings of having to retreat ro the restroom when overwhelmed, and the feeling of wanting to go when my cat did. My cat snibbles was everything and when I had to put her down, well that hollow feeling never left. This is a heartbreaking little story. Because i feel it.
Me having horror brain i thought she had passed while in the stall and the singing was death coming to get her or something. which would of made me lose it because then I would of worried about the cat by itself!
As far as criticisms. A me thing, but It may just he awkward if added to your style. is more in depth description of how she was feeling in any given moment. maybe lingered on those emotions a bit longer.
Great danm story. Hurt me and that's a testament to the work. Good job.
"She never finished that book, but she read plenty of others to make up for the grievance, so she forgave herself" love it! Great piece as always Lila!
enjoyed this. i like how you didn't go hard in the paint with the metaphysical nature of it.
thank you! sometimes i like how "matter of fact" strangeness can be.
Got done with some chores and saw this was uploaded so I sat down to give it a read!
I so very much sympathize with the feelings of having to retreat ro the restroom when overwhelmed, and the feeling of wanting to go when my cat did. My cat snibbles was everything and when I had to put her down, well that hollow feeling never left. This is a heartbreaking little story. Because i feel it.
Me having horror brain i thought she had passed while in the stall and the singing was death coming to get her or something. which would of made me lose it because then I would of worried about the cat by itself!
As far as criticisms. A me thing, but It may just he awkward if added to your style. is more in depth description of how she was feeling in any given moment. maybe lingered on those emotions a bit longer.
Great danm story. Hurt me and that's a testament to the work. Good job.
thank you!<3 i wrote that today after going to the bathroom and thinking "what if a ghost was singing in here wouldn't that be silly"
Sometimes those are the best ideas. I have said it before, the idea for Fed to life was just "what if I heard breathing in the shower drain."
"She never finished that book, but she read plenty of others to make up for the grievance, so she forgave herself" love it! Great piece as always Lila!
thank you!! (that part may have been a self-insert)