"You leave me to attend to one who is fortunate enough to have an entire staff to care for her! Elodie is there, it is she who she wants right now. It baffles me how you don’t recognize these things, as aware that you are!” <- This especially I thought VERY clear in my mind; I could seeee it. Been fed well as always.
RAAHH THERE IT IS!! THE CONTEXT!! THE BIT!!
"You leave me to attend to one who is fortunate enough to have an entire staff to care for her! Elodie is there, it is she who she wants right now. It baffles me how you don’t recognize these things, as aware that you are!” <- This especially I thought VERY clear in my mind; I could seeee it. Been fed well as always.
hehehe thank you!!! the entire chapter is quite emotional, nearly wore myself out writing it. (channeling my abandonment complex into Etienne)
ALSO im glad you could see that! it can be tricky to develop a scene through mostly dialogue, but it's my favorite thing--as you've well seen by now